Thursday 14 April 2016

                                 100WC BY:RainbowSunshine
                                 Week#13

                              Mountain Climbing
When I looked at the mountain that was nearly touching the sky, I felt like puking.

  "There's no way I'm climbing that mountain." I cried.

 But I had a weird urge to climb the mountain. As I took my first step, It felt like I was getting closer to the top, but the spot just grew and grew. Finally, when I got to the top, my foot slipped! Right when I fell to the ground, I saw a big, heavy rock falling down, coming towards me. When the rock was an inch away from my face... I woke up!

  "Thank god it was a dream." I cheered.
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2 comments:

  1. Pinky14 April 2016 at 20:19

    The ending was very surprising! Why did you feel like puking when looking at the mountain? You could use some more descriptive language. You have a lot of I's that you could fix. Otherwise the story was very creative.

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  2. Unknown14 April 2016 at 20:35

    The character felt like puking because he was going to climb the mountain, and the mountain was so high that it gave the character a weird feeling like wanting to puke. And by the way, it was a DREAM.

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